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Iambic pentameter is a very difficult thing to pull off. I felt you did a pretty good job with it. I had to give you a lot of credit for creating something with that style. I also felt the main point was well done and approached well although I have seen it done before you captured your on view on it. I felt that it was nice but I feel that it could be improved if you work on removing some of those cliche lines that I felt removed from the piece overall. I generally liked it and hope you continue it.
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